Exposition
versus Resolution: Resurrection
Written
by Hope
Ahhh, now
that's how an exposition episode should be done, kudos to Todd
Slavkin & Darren Swimmer for taking "Resurrection,"
a necessary hour of back story, explanation, and story-forwarding
for Smallville, and making it fun to watch. This is the kind
of episode Verheiden and Greenberg's "Hereafter" could
have been, though it was by no means perfect.
Of the good,
Slavkin & Swimmer have a real gift for writing the characters
in motion. Peterson & Souders is the team they want when
you want character reaction, but Slavkin & Swimmer do really
well when the characters have to act. Some of their character
turns seem a little fast- Jonathan changing his mind that quickly
to Clark's plea seemed a little rushed, but because Slavkin
& Swimmer know how guys interact, how guys talk, the scene
still played well. Another example is Lana's sudden unburdening
of all her Adam information- it was convenient to the script
that that happen in one scene, so again, it was rushed, but
the dialogue was delivered believably, so it still worked.
These guys
have a great grasp of how to get things done in an interesting,
stakes-raising fashion. Unlike their "Velocity," which
featured a linear double climax (both climaxes were fed directly
from Clark's need to solve Pete's problem,) "Resurrection"
featured a very nifty twist on that- the first climax had nothing
to do with Clark's need to solve Garrett's problem; it had everything
to do with the continuing Clark-Lex-Lionel triangle. When Clark
overheard Lex talking with Dr. Teng, it was both unexpected,
joined the A and B lines together in a perfect instance, and
forwarded the overall arc for that triangle. That's the kind
of subtlety I'd expect to see from a show in its third year,
and it was very nicely done.
Another
really nice thing that Slavkin & Swimmer can do is create
an extraneous relationship for one of the main characters that
feels natural. They provided everything we needed to know about
Clark and Garrett's friendship in their first scene together,
and they did it organically: it makes sense that they would
have spent time together in the hospital, it makes sense that
Clark (and his family,) would care what happens to him after
his brother dies. Clark's care taking aspect, nicely mirrored
in Martha's delivery of the same, was nice, strong emphasis
for that strength of character we know he has.
At the same
time, they showed that Clark is still holding on hard to the
vestiges of his childhood- of course he's more interested in
staying with his father than helping someone else. And of course,
his parents urge him to do otherwise. The whole Kent family
was beautifully framed; the parents' positive influence on the
son very much evident tonight, and that was a nice refresher.
And, in a wonderful nod toward Clark's growth, he finally manages
to lie to Lana convincingly; a trait he's unfortunately going
to have to cultivate for his future as Superman.
On the Lex
front, wow. Slavkin & Swimmer did a fantastic job writing
Lex in this episode, really capturing his two-tiered motivation
for everything he does, the double-layered way he speaks to
people who have something he wants. He continues to cheerfully
use Chloe's willingness to share information, but when she verges
on territory he'd like to keep annexed for himself, he nudges
her out
with a smile, with concern for her safety, and
how can a girl complain about that? I don't think it's even
occurred to Chloe she's being played, because Lex is playing
her brilliantly.
Conversely,
Lana's just suspicious enough that I think she's starting to
realize that Lex's protector act isn't entirely pure. He asks
her too many questions, he's more intimate with her than he's
ever been- and how frightening is it to see Lex give Lana the
same chin-chuck he gave Molly in "Delete," that 'you're
lovely, and I fully intend to manipulate you' gesture? It's
fascinating to watch him play Chloe (and I have to admit, I
feel kind of bad for her, because that closing shot in the Lex
and Chloe scene gave me the impression that Chloe- perhaps briefly-
harbored an infatuated moment, believing that he cares about
her well-being,) but it really is chilling to see him use Lana
as a pawn, considering their history.
The only
downside to this script, and unfortunately, it's a problem Slavkin
& Swimmer have always have, and haven't *quite* worked out
yet, are a point of internal inconsistency, and a lack of resolution
on some points. The first happened because they needed to tell
the audience what's going on with Adam, Lionel and the Kryptonian
Serum of Resurrection. We already know that LuthorCorp will
provide a new name, a new life, for one of its medical experiments
because that's exactly what happened with Adam. And tonight,
LuthorCorp went through the trouble of forging donation and
cremation paperwork and making sure the only living kin was
notified the remains had been cremated.
So why the
hell did Dr. Teng allow Vince to run home to grab Garrett? Well,
metatextually, because she had to- Slavkin & Swimmer couldn't
show us the full effect of Adam's treatment, unless Vince went
home. Intratextually, it doesn't make a bit of sense, even with
the brief nod to Dr. Teng's soft touch where it concerns her
patients. This is a multibillion dollar corporation with far
too much invested in this project to just let its latest guinea
pig show off his resurrection to a family member who already
believed he was dead. Lionel went to the trouble to hide that
Metron Pharmaceuticals was still operational, he went to the
trouble of creating a plausible death scenario for the family,
he went to the trouble of crafting an entirely new identity
for Chad Nash and was apparently going to do the same; it's
a failure of internal logic to allow Vince to return home from
Garrett. Metatextually, it had to happen; intratextually, the
way it happened was foolish.
On the lack
of resolution- the A line itself was resolved, but Clark's final
scene with his parents was strangely lacking. Clark addressed
a specific possibility: his blood could save lives; maybe he
needs to think more about that. Jonathan and Martha addressed
the fact that they have faith he'll save plenty of lives in
his lifetime. They never say revealing himself is a bad idea,
that it's a good idea- in fact, they never say anything specifically
*about* that proposition. While this could have been done in
a way that fostered the idea that Jonathan and Martha want Clark
to make his own decisions, it just seemed like they were having
two different, only tangentially related conversations.
However,
much like a failure of internal logic didn't damage the audience's
enjoyment of "Velocity," these two problems didn't
sink "Resurrection." They're still issues that need
to be addressed in future scripts, but Slavkin & Swimmer
do have that gift of making a really good hour of television
out of a pretty good script. This was an episode that worked
hard, but looked like it was hardly working- this is how exposition
gets done right.
Screenwriting:
B+
To Watch: A-
Next Week:
Okay, I think it's safe to say that Adam is finally going to
lose it, and Lana's going to be pretty upset about it. Plus,
rain! Wet Clark always works for me.
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